In KellyVille all people are equal. No one is better then anyone else. The Work is split up on a weekly basis you alternate the work. If you lie, cheat, steal, discriminate, or use fowl language you are kicked out of KellyVille.
I feel that there needed to be a perfect society and there was too much chaos in the world. You can only communicate to people within KellyVille and Mattland because Mattland is an Allie of KellyVille. There is one leader Michael Kelly.
other than making the paragraphs longer with more infomation,i like the fact your society only works with one other society. Also how you you believed there was crazyness in the world.
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